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Dec. 30th, 2004

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Watercolor 9"x12" Titled "Memories that are just beyond the edge of memory"

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From:dizzy_gazelle
Date:December 30th, 2004 09:00 am (UTC)
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I like the leftside but the right seems like it is too empty and could be eliminated altogether.
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From:seejanepaint
Date:December 30th, 2004 03:56 pm (UTC)

what is this "composition" thing you speak of... :)

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Thank you. Sometimes I lack the ability to balance my artwork. I appreciate your imput. But... I rather like the "left justified" look. Could I keep the integrity of the original composition by adding more texture into the background? or should I just chop it up?
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From:seejanepaint
Date:December 30th, 2004 03:57 pm (UTC)

Re: what is this "composition" thing you speak of... :)

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oh... and I REALLY like the water marks on the right bottom corner... I don't want to lose them :(...
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From:mad_emma
Date:August 3rd, 2005 01:51 pm (UTC)
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i see two faces there. was it meant to do that?
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